User contributions for Dbratland

1 February 2023

• 21:2721:27, 1 February 2023 diff hist −12‎ Solar Panel (Subnautica) ‎ rm extra words that don't add meaning Tag: Visual edit
• 02:4502:45, 1 February 2023 diff hist +306‎ Propulsion Cannon (Subnautica) ‎ clarify first paragraph. Mention it can move a Seamoth Tag: Visual edit

27 January 2023

• 22:5322:53, 27 January 2023 diff hist +320‎ Propulsion Cannon (Subnautica) ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 22:4022:40, 27 January 2023 diff hist +193‎ Eggs ‎ clarify egg identification process. Every sentence doesn't need to say "also" when more information is added. Tag: Visual edit
• 22:2822:28, 27 January 2023 diff hist −119‎ Eggs ‎ spam Tag: Visual edit
• 21:1821:18, 27 January 2023 diff hist +198‎ Water Filtration Machine (Subnautica) ‎ clarify that nuclear or bio power plants can fit in mutipurpose with water filter, but not an alien containment Tag: Visual edit
• 20:5820:58, 27 January 2023 diff hist +51‎ Crashfish (Subnautica) ‎ clarify that the vehicle can trigger the crashfish Tag: Visual edit
• 20:4920:49, 27 January 2023 diff hist +78‎ Crashfish (Subnautica) ‎ kinda buried the lead her not mentioningi Tag: Visual edit
• 18:4418:44, 27 January 2023 diff hist −62‎ Water Filtration Machine (Subnautica) ‎ "utilize" means the same thing as "use", it's just three syllables instead of one. It's not necessary to tell the reader to "note" things. If you think it needs more attention, place it higher up in the article. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:4018:40, 27 January 2023 diff hist −5‎ Seabases (Subnautica) ‎ habitat compartments -> interior pieces to match current interface Tag: Visual edit

26 January 2023

• 19:1819:18, 26 January 2023 diff hist +4‎ Lightweight High Capacity Tank ‎ fix typo Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1619:16, 26 January 2023 diff hist −161‎ Lightweight High Capacity Tank ‎ correct swimming speed penalty, add to infobox Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5918:59, 26 January 2023 diff hist +61‎ High Capacity O₂ Tank (Subnautica) ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5718:57, 26 January 2023 diff hist +64‎ Template:Craftable ‎ add Penalties field under Perks so costs/benefits can be weighted together. Also Perks is the wrong word; a perk is a side-effect or additional bonus, not the main point or purpose of something.
• 18:5118:51, 26 January 2023 diff hist +430‎ High Capacity O₂ Tank (Subnautica) ‎ Mention of benefits of item should be alongside penalties. Saying "note that" is unnecessary. If you think something needs greater emphasis, move it higher up in the text. Tag: Visual edit

23 January 2023

• 18:1718:17, 23 January 2023 diff hist −24‎ m Cyclops ‎ since you have noted it you don't need to tell anyone to note it. Tag: Visual edit

22 January 2023

• 23:2923:29, 22 January 2023 diff hist +170‎ Alien Arch Caches ‎ clarify wording Tag: Visual edit

20 January 2023

• 03:1203:12, 20 January 2023 diff hist +1,671‎ Seamoth ‎ some rewrites and added detail about exiting seamoth safely. Tag: Visual edit
• 03:0403:04, 20 January 2023 diff hist −10‎ Reaper Leviathan ‎ The description of being grabbed, roared at, and pulled into its mouth is not what being "killed instantly" means. It's a rather drawn out death. Tag: Visual edit

18 January 2023

• 17:5917:59, 18 January 2023 diff hist −287‎ Degasi Seabases ‎ It's unknown how they did just about everything. We know Marguerit hundred a lot of Stalkers and eventually at least one Reaper, so, what's the problem? Also, the stasis rifle fragments lying everywhere are a pretty big clue. Tags: Reverted Visual edit

16 January 2023

• 01:3501:35, 16 January 2023 diff hist −46‎ Scanner Room (Subnautica) ‎ There's no reason to keep saying "note this" "note that". That fact that we bothered to write it at all means that we think it's worth knowing. Tag: Visual edit

13 January 2023

• 18:3518:35, 13 January 2023 diff hist +286‎ Aquarium (Subnautica) ‎ mention that power isn't needed, and viewing the contents is sort of a feature other storage doesn't have current Tag: Visual edit

10 January 2023

• 19:3819:38, 10 January 2023 diff hist +184‎ Aquarium (Subnautica) ‎ why would they decompose in an aquarium that has automatic environmental regulation? The real mystery is why any storage works just as well. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3219:32, 10 January 2023 diff hist +222‎ Food & Water ‎ you'd think you'd need an aquarium or alien containment for live fish, but not really Tag: Visual edit
• 19:2219:22, 10 January 2023 diff hist +103‎ Locker (Subnautica) ‎ no need to be a smart ass about the name 'wall locker'. It doesn't only attach to walls, and not everything is as it seems. Tag: Visual edit

14 January 2022

• 20:5320:53, 14 January 2022 diff hist +83‎ Tree Leech ‎ mention that if it is "exploitable" as PDA says, it not useful in this game Tag: Visual edit
• 20:4220:42, 14 January 2022 diff hist +59‎ Stalker ‎ we remember this was mentioned above. It was only one paragraph ago. Tag: Visual edit

10 January 2022

• 18:2618:26, 10 January 2022 diff hist −24‎ m Glacial Connection ‎ deleted words that add exactly nothing Tag: Visual edit

8 January 2022

• 19:4619:46, 8 January 2022 diff hist −40‎ Hull Reinforcement ‎ a redlink to the Below Zero hull reinforcement makes no sense. There is none in Below Zero. Tag: 2017 source edit

7 January 2022

• 23:3023:30, 7 January 2022 diff hist +36‎ m Mineral Detector ‎ replace odd idioms with plain English Tag: Visual edit

22 December 2021

• 19:4719:47, 22 December 2021 diff hist +35‎ Alien Containment (Subnautica) ‎ fewer words, more info Tag: Visual edit

20 December 2021

• 19:3919:39, 20 December 2021 diff hist −27‎ Copper Ore (Subnautica) ‎ useless extra words that add no meaning Tag: Visual edit

17 December 2021

• 23:1023:10, 17 December 2021 diff hist +3‎ Limestone Outcrop (Subnautica) ‎ "like" implies there are other things besides these two. It's either CU or TI, that's all. Tag: Visual edit

13 December 2021

• 19:4719:47, 13 December 2021 diff hist −96‎ Seamoth Perimeter Defense System ‎ We know "It must be noted that..." because it's written here. If it wasn't then we'd have never said it. Tag: 2017 source edit

12 December 2021

• 22:2122:21, 12 December 2021 diff hist −20‎ Seabases (Subnautica) ‎ We know we want people to keep it in mind. If we didn't, we wouldn't say it in the first place. "Keep in mind", "remember", "note that" etc are useless filler that actually distract from the important thing you're trying to say. Tag: 2017 source edit